When the bluebottle lands on the mantelpiece and settles on a note tucked behind Granddad’s carving of something,  

it  

finally  

shuts  

the  

hell  

up.  

It’s  

 an ordinary Tuesday evening. Dad and I are eating and Mum’s at Zumba, her  

five-times-a-week  

fad.  

Zoom Baa: middle-aged sheep in lycra, bleating to  

the  

Latino  

beat.  

Mum’s  

not  

due  

back  

till  

late;;  

after  

class  

she  

hangs  

out  

 with fanatical friends and drinks wheatgrass cocktails. When she comes home  

her  

breath  

will  

smell  

of  

haystacks;;  

Dad’s  

will  

smell  

earthy  

too,  

of  

 red wine.

zzzzzzzzzz ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Dad  

grabs  

a  

newspaper,  

lunges  

towards  

the  

mantelpiece  

and  

splats  

the  

fly.  

 Granddad’s  

carving  

hits  

the  

floor  

and  

smashes;;  

the  

note,  

which  

is  

folded  

 in two, has the remains of an abdomen on it. Dad picks up the carnage and dumps it on Mum’s place mat. ‘At least there’s some meat on the table now,’ he  

says.  

‘Hey,  

what’s  

the  

last  

thing  

that  

goes  

through  

a  

fly’s  

mind  

before  

it  

 hits the windscreen?’

Humour him.

‘Dunno’, I say. The note has unfolded.

‘Its backside.’ Dad chuckles and serves himself a portion of the beetroot and bulgur salad that Mum left out for us. His grin has faded by the time he slops marinated tofu onto his plate. ‘Bloody pigswill,’ he says. He takes his  

knife  

and  

fork  

and  

slices  

a  

boiled  

potato  

in  

two,  

right  

through  

an  

eye;;  

 Mum says the skin is nutritional.

I reach for the note: Going away. Not coming back.

Dad eats the potato: a crunch of soil. He slurps his wine.

Going away. Not coming back. So she’d meant it: when Ben’s old enough .  

 .  

 .  

 I  

 didn’t  

 think  

 that  

 would  

 be  

 fifteen.  

 I  

 drop  

 my  

 tumbler  

 of  

 water.  

 Fragments  

of  

glass  

skid  

across  

the  

floor.  

As  

my  

lips  

part,  

my  

mouth  

twists  

 and cramps, a face like poor Joe’s next door. All I need do now is drool and piss myself.

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Dad jumps up. ‘Are you okay? It’s only a cheap tumbler.’

I  

grab  

the  

note  

and  

scrunch  

it  

into  

a  

ball.  

Dad  

tries  

to  

unclench  

my  

fist  

but  

 my knuckles stay tight. He digs his nails into my skin. I wrench away my hand and ram the ball of paper into my mouth, bite so hard that the pain in my teeth shoots through my head. Dad clamps my chin between his thumb  

and  

forefinger,  

forces  

open  

my  

mouth  

like  

he  

used  

to  

when  

I  

was  

 a kid blowing gum I’d found spat on the street. My jaw goes limp. The paper  

glistens,  

purple  

with  

beetroot  

saliva;;  

it  

looks  

like  

a  

chunk  

of  

mangled  

 brain.

Dad’s chest heaves. ‘What the hell?’ He opens up the ball with trembling fingers  

 and  

 smudges  

 the  

 ink  

 as  

 he  

 smoothes  

 the  

 paper  

 flat  

 on  

 the  

 table.  

 My  

teeth  

have  

chomped  

holes  

in  

the  

words  

–  

way. No com g ba  

–  

but  

Dad  

 understands: an animal noise launches from deep inside his belly.

I stumble out of the back door and race across the lawn, into the woods, scratching my legs in the undergrowth. When I stop for breath, the front door slams. As the car screeches down the drive, the underneath grates on  

the  

uneven  

track.  

Dad  

just  

paid  

to  

have  

the  

suspension  

fixed  

so  

he’ll  

be  

 pissed off if he’s damaged it again.

I  

make  

my  

way  

back  

to  

the  

garden  

where  

I  

sit  

on  

a  

flat  

rock  

in  

the  

yellow- green  

evening  

light;;  

the  

sun  

filters  

through  

the  

trees,  

makes  

my  

skin  

look  

 jaundiced.  

As  

the  

wind  

blows  

in  

the  

poplars  

it  

sounds  

like  

the  

sea;;  

I  

imagine  

 Mum sailing away.

A row of frogs guards the pond. When a rabbit darts across the grass the frogs  

 turn  

 and  

 stare  

 through  

 black,  

 gold-lidded  

 eyes;;  

 only  

 their  

 heads,  

 dappled like courgettes, are above the water. The pondweed looks like lentils  

floating  

in  

the  

scum  

on  

a  

pan  

of  

soup  

but  

a  

frog  

clears  

a  

watery  

black  

 path  

as  

it  

swims  

to  

the  

edge.  

It  

climbs  

onto  

a  

rock  

and  

watches  

me;;  

still,  

 except for the beat of its heart. It probably knew before we did. Mum loves the  

frogs;;  

she  

wouldn’t  

have  

left  

without  

saying  

goodbye.

The phone in my pocket beeps. Mum? It’s another text from my girlfriend, Melissa: Why didn’t you call me last night? I punch a message into the keyboard  

–  

Because I’m dating your brother  

–  

and  

press  

send.  

I  

remember  

 that she doesn’t have a brother, that was Melanie, or was it Melinda? I should have said dating your dad. I’m bored of Melissa. She’s cute but she has this nasal condition which makes her squeak. The thing is, I’ve bet my friend Scott that until Christmas I’ll only date girls whose names begin with Mel.

The frog makes a splash as it climbs into a shallow bowl next to the pond. Mum  

fills  

the  

bowl  

with  

clean  

water  

every  

morning,  

so  

the  

frogs  

can  

wash  

 off the weed. She talks to them for twenty minutes before she does her T’ai Chi.

On  

Thursday,  

on  

the  

way  

to  

football  

practice,  

I  

bump  

into  

Lindsay,  

Mum’s  

 dumb friend, the one who tried it on at the meat-free barbecue.

‘Your  

mum’s  

okay’,  

she  

sniffs.  

‘She’s  

gone  

to  

South  

America  

to  

.  

.  

.  

find  

 herself. It’s devastating for me, being the one left behind. And I’m going to have  

to  

switch  

to  

Pilates;;  

the  

new  

Zumba  

teacher  

can’t  

shake  

his  

hips  

like  

 Roberto did.’

A week later, on Friday afternoon when I get home from school, Dad has  

 finally  

 emerged  

 from  

 his  

 room.  

 His  

 face  

 is  

 gaunt  

 and  

 grim  

 with  

 determination. He takes food from the larder shelves and hurls it into a black plastic sack. Jars smash and packets explode: seaweed, semolina, sesame  

oil,  

soya  

beans,  

spelt  

flour,  

spirulina  

.  

.  

.  

at  

least  

we  

won’t  

have  

to  

 alphabetise the groceries any more.

‘D’you wanna hand, Dad?’

‘That’d be great. You can make a start on the Ts.’

‘No problem,’ I say, dropping a jar of tahini into the rubbish. ‘Hey, isn’t this a waste? What about the starving people?’

‘This  

stuff  

would  

finish  

them  

off.’ ‘How’s your day been?’ I ask.

‘Fine. That imbecile friend of your mum’s dropped by, got me out of bed. I told him she’d pissed off to the States.’

‘Which imbecile?’

‘The one who wipes his hands on his hair after he’s eaten.’ ‘Claudius? AKA John.’

‘He’s the one. Well guess what?’

‘What?’  

I  

start  

on  

the  

Vs:  

veggie  

chicken  

substitute,  

vermicelli,  

Viagra?

‘He cheered me up. D’you know why? I never have to see any of your mum’s loopy friends again.’

Dad drops a box of yeast sachets into the bin. ‘All done?’ I say, clearing the last of the vitamins.

‘Yeah. Now, I’m starving. I weighed myself this afternoon: twelve bleeding stone. Come on, son, we’re going to Waitrose.’

Dad’s gonna seek solace in cheese. Mum would never allow cheese in the house: one hundred percent fat, she said, one hundred percent fat. To deny Dad cheese was like denying Mum colonic irrigation and Dad would never have dreamed of doing that.

We  

 visit  

 the  

 cheese  

 counter  

 first  

 and  

 stand,  

 transfixed,  

 overwhelmed  

 by  

 the choice. I choose a cheddar before I head round the supermarket with the  

shopping  

list.  

When  

I  

come  

back  

Dad  

is  

still  

at  

the  

deli;;  

he’s  

filled  

our  

 trolley with artisanal cheese.

‘I’m no connoisseur,’ he says. ‘So I chose the names I liked.’

I peer at the labels: Pantysgawn, Sussex Slipcote, Black-eyed Susan, Farleigh  

Wallop  

and  

Red  

Devil  

.  

.  

.  

who  

needs  

Viagra?

*****

Mum’s been gone for four months now. She sounds weird in her letters and I think she may have joined a cult: she always was a fan of Tom Cruise. She’s  

been  

finding  

herself  

all  

over  

the  

place.  

Isn’t  

that  

what  

schizophrenics 

 do? She signed her last letter Mum and Roberto. I took it outside, propped it up against a tree and pissed on it.

Dad  

and  

I  

dine  

at  

the  

all-you-can-eat  

Chinese  

buffet  

every  

week;;  

it’s  

not  

a  

 treat like it used to be. Mum only let us go twice a year, on our birthdays, and she wore dark glasses and a low-brimmed hat. We used to joke that there would be a twenty-stone woman feeding from the buffet and there always was: polystyrene plate bending under a mountain of food, plastic cutlery snapping as it cut through deep-fried lumps of something that didn’t taste of anything much.

As one late summer heatwave merges into another, the vegetables in the garden shrivel and die. Dad walks round the plot and smiles as he checks out the withered cabbages, wilted squash and chewed lettuce leaves. ‘I hated doing this bloody patch,’ he says. ‘But not as much as I hated eating what came out of it.’

Wasps feast on the fruit that rots under the apple trees in the orchard. The woozy insects crawl into clothes on the washing line to sleep off their hangovers. I found a wasp (Latin name Vespa Vulgaris, sounds like a Bond girl, shame it wasn’t!) in my boxers this morning, before I put them on I hasten to add. A sting there could have put me out of action for days, even though  

 I’m  

 not  

 exactly  

 in  

 action  

 right  

 now;;  

 it’s  

 hard  

 being  

 restricted  

 to  

 Mels. Scott says there are plenty more girls’ names beginning with Mel but he can only think of three: Melisande, Melvyn and Melanoma, none of whom go to our school.

‘Melvyn’s a boy’s name’, I say.

‘Well, Melvynia then.’

‘That isn’t a name.’

‘Anything can be a name’, says Scott. ‘Melanoma’s a cancer.’

‘So?’

‘Who’d call their kid after a cancer?’ I ask.

‘Scarlet’s a name.’

‘Scarlet’s not a cancer.’

‘Scarlet fever’ll kill you a whole lot quicker than a cancer will.’ ‘People don’t get scarlet fever any more.’

‘Bro, they do,’ says Scott. ‘All these things are coming back. Didn’t you hear about that man in the States who got the plague? A cat bit him and the next  

thing  

he  

knew  

his  

fingers  

turned  

black  

and  

were  

falling  

off  

all  

over  

 the place.’

One  

evening,  

when  

Dad  

and  

I  

are  

munching  

bread  

and  

chunks  

of  

Black- eyed Susan, Dad clears his throat: his cheeks have pink spots on them.

‘I’ve got something to tell you, Ben,’ he blurts out. ‘I’ve been getting to know a woman I met on a dating site. Don’t worry, she isn’t anything like your  

mother;;  

I  

didn’t  

pick  

women  

who  

described  

themselves  

as  

slim.’

Dad  

dating  

is  

gross,  

worse  

than  

Mum  

and  

Roberto.  

I  

remember  

the  

Viagra  

 I put in the bin. Black-eyed Susan sticks in my throat. Nothing like the thought of erectile dysfunction to make you lose your appetite.

‘We’ve been on a few dates,’ says Dad. ‘I didn’t know how to tell you. She’s a  

very  

stylish  

lady  

and  

she’s  

crazy  

about  

cheese.  

She’s  

called  

Véronique.  

I’d  

 like to invite her here. I can show you her photo if . . . ’

‘I’m meeting Scott,’ I say.

‘It won’t take long.’

Dad  

flips  

open  

his  

laptop  

and  

his  

profile  

page  

pops  

up.  

His  

photo  

was  

taken  

 two years ago, when Mum made us to go camping in the Lake District and our  

tent  

got  

humped  

by  

a  

bull  

–  

it’s  

never  

smelt  

the  

same  

since.  

Dad  

was  

 in good shape then and had a tan. The picture gives me a jolt. Dad’s bigger now, much bigger: he has a tyre round his middle and his belly hangs over his belt. He’s jowly too.

Véronique  

is  

dark  

and  

.  

.  

.  

voluptuous  

and  

.  

.  

.  

well,  

her  

boobs  

kind  

of  

take  

 over her face, and the rest of her body.

‘She’s a beautiful woman,’ says Dad. ‘Makes your mother look like a shrivelled prune.’

My chest goes tight when he says that. Puts a pain behind my eyeballs.

Dad’s  

nervous  

about  

Véronique  

coming  

for  

dinner;;  

he’s  

been  

cooking  

for  

 three days. He thinks he’s persuaded me to stay for apéritifs but Scott’s gonna phone at six-thirty to say his grandma’s died and he needs emotional support.  

Except  

now  

it’s  

five  

past  

seven  

and  

the  

bastard  

hasn’t called.

‘How do I look, son?’

Dad’s wearing oatmeal-coloured trousers, tight on the groin, and blue and white striped espadrilles. His shirt gapes over his moobs.

‘You look great.’

A trickle of sweat runs down Dad’s temple and as he lifts his hand to wipe it away a button pops off his shirt.

The  

 doorbell  

 chimes  

 the  

 Star  

 Wars  

 theme.  

 Véronique  

 isn’t  

 gonna  

 think  

 that’s cool.

‘Shit, get that for me,’ says Dad. ‘Tell her I’m on the phone to my publisher.’ He takes the stairs two at a time, panting like a dog.

‘What publisher?’ I open the door. ‘Good  

evening.  

I’m  

Véronique.’

‘Hi,’  

I  

say  

to  

Véronique’s  

boobs.  

I  

can’t  

help  

it.  

‘Pleased  

to  

meet  

you.  

Dad  

 will be down in a moment. He’s on the phone to his publisher.’

Véronique  

 follows  

 her  

 boobs  

 in  

 through  

 the  

 door.  

 She  

 smells  

 of  

 Mum’s  

 perfume.

‘Would you like a drink?’ I ask.

‘A gin and tonic, please.’

As I struggle to pop the ice cubes out of the tray, I glance at the page open in the recipe book: Allow three pairs per serving. Season with salt and pepper  

then  

fry  

the  

frogs’  

legs  

in  

butter  

and  

white  

wine  

over  

a  

high  

flame. I take a large swig from the bottle of gin. Does Waitrose sell frogs’ legs?

Dad tramps down the stairs. I half expect him to wear a beret and a string of onions. No shit, he is wearing a beret! What a tool.

‘Bonsoir,  

Véronique.  

You  

look  

ravissante,’ says Dad and kisses her on the lips.  

Squelch.  

I  

take  

another  

swig  

of  

gin.  

Dad  

and  

Véronique  

sit  

on  

one  

sofa  

 and I sit on the other. Dad has his hand on her thigh. It must be sweaty if the rest of him is anything to go by.

‘Do you know that cheese is good for the prevention of tooth decay?’ says Dad  

as  

he  

passes  

Véronique  

a  

plate  

of  

cheddar  

and  

pineapple  

chunks  

on  

 cocktail sticks. Cool, huh?

‘I didn’t know that,’ she says. ‘Ben?’ says Dad.

‘No,’  

 I  

 say.  

 ‘I  

 thought  

 that  

 was  

 toothpaste.  

 It’s  

 to  

 do  

 with  

 the  

 fluoride.’  

 I  

 grab my jacket and leave the house. When I walk past the pond, there isn’t a frog in sight.

*****

Dad goes to evening classes and learns how to cook. He serves up American- sized portions of French cuisine: boeuf  

bourguignon,  

filet  

d’agneau and pavé de veau. He prepares sauces from butter and cream. He glugs French wine and listens to French opera and, the noises would suggest, makes passionate French love.

I’ve  

 got  

 a  

 photo  

 of  

 Mum  

 on  

 my  

 desk  

 but  

 I  

 keep  

 it  

 face  

 down;;  

 I  

 can’t  

 concentrate  

on  

my  

homework  

if  

I  

catch  

her  

looking  

at  

me.  

Véronique  

and  

 Dad hang out a lot. I’m just glad Dad’s got a smile on his face, even though it sits on top of a lot of chins and a belly that looks like a beach ball.

To  

 celebrate  

 their  

 first  

 anniversary,  

 Dad  

 orders  

 Véronique  

 a  

 shipment  

 of  

 the  

finest  

Camembert,  

all  

the  

way  

from  

Normandy.  

Holy  

shit  

that  

cheese  

 reeks.

‘Les pieds de Dieu’, says Dad.
‘What?’
‘The feet of God. That’s what a ripe Camembert smells like.’

I  

think  

Dad’s  

heart  

breaks  

when  

Véronique  

dumps  

him  

that  

evening  

but  

 at least she tells him face to face. ‘I have no choice,’ she sobs, as I listen outside the bedroom door. ‘My husband is joining me from Paris.’

It’s two weeks before Dad can bear to throw the Camembert away. The rind ruptures and the melted cheese oozes out and spreads across the table. The stench reminds me of when Scott had a fungal infection between his toes and woke me by rubbing his feet in my face.

*****

Dad  

was  

distraught  

after  

he  

split  

up  

with  

Véronique  

and  

he  

took  

loads  

of  

 time  

off  

work;;  

six  

months  

later  

he  

lost  

his  

job.  

All  

he  

does  

now  

is  

eat  

and  

 sleep  

in  

front  

of  

the  

TV.  

His  

belly  

is  

so  

huge  

that  

he  

needs  

massive  

meals  

to  

 feel full. Money’s tight so we drive to Aldi once a week and pile the trolleys high. The cheese we buy tastes like rubber and comes on top of pizzas. In the Chinese restaurant, we no longer joke about the twenty-stone woman. When I try to talk to Dad about his weight, he refuses to even look at me.

Dad can bolt a dozen doughnuts in one sitting. It’s as though he swallows them whole, must dislocate his jaw or something, like snakes devouring their prey on the Discovery Channel. Jam spurts from his lips, dribbles down his chins. I watch his throat, expect a doughnut to stick out like a giant Adam’s apple.

One  

doctor  

suggests  

a  

psychiatrist.  

‘No  

chance,’  

Dad  

tells  

me.  

‘I  

don’t  

want  

 to end up crazy like your mum.’ Another recommends a mobility scooter – as though Dad’s gonna go round Aldi in that: license plate FAT 1. I’m relieved when Dad writes notes to excuse himself from parents’ evenings and sports days. Kids can be cruel, like those assholes in the States who made the fat bus monitor cry. That woman made a hell of a lot of money from donations though. Dad and I should set up a scam, get Scott involved and  

split  

the  

profit.  

It  

could  

pay  

for  

a  

gastric  

band.

*****

A year later, when Dad hasn’t left the house for nine months, I buy our food at the rip-off corner shop on my way home from college. While I prepare dinner, Dad sits in his chair in a patch of sunlight, sweats and rots like the fruit on the ground. I stay up late to revise for my exams, so late that a pale blue light shines though the curtains and I hear the blackbirds sing.

Eight thousand. That’s how many calories Dad ate today. A doctor came to our house, told him he was morbidly obese, that he’s at risk from heart disease, stroke, diabetes, breathing problems, incontinence . . . I stopped listening.  

When  

the  

doctor  

left,  

Dad  

sent  

me  

to  

buy  

fish  

and  

chips.

I don’t like leaving Dad in the evenings but when I do it’s to hang out with Lucy, a cute girl I met in the corner shop. We make out in the park and in the shopping arcade but we soon reach the legal limit of what you can do on a public bench.

‘Why can’t I come to your house?’ Lucy says. ‘You know my father will kill you if you come to ours. He hates boys. And he’s got a gun.’

Psycho!

‘No reason,’ I say. ‘Maybe next week?’ 108

‘You always say next week.’ Lucy sulks, sticks out her bottom lip, looks so sexy that I want to jump her right there.

‘Why don’t you come round tomorrow night?’ I say.

The following evening I get Dad comfortable in bed, switch on the television  

and  

adjust  

the  

headphones  

on  

his  

ears.  

He  

finds  

it  

hard  

to  

get  

to  

 the en-suite bathroom on his own so I leave out his pan.

I  

mute  

the  

TV  

with  

the  

remote.  

‘I’m  

gonna  

meet  

Scott,  

Dad.  

I  

won’t  

be  

late.  

 Have a good evening.’

Dad’s  

eyes  

are  

dark  

holes  

buried  

in  

inflated  

flesh.  

He  

nods.  

I  

turn  

the  

sound  

 back on, loud, and walk towards the door.

‘Ben?’

‘Yeah?’ I turn to face him.

‘ . . . Nothing.’ The  

holes  

fill  

up:  

dark  

pools.  

I  

lock  

Dad  

in  

his  

room.

I look out for Lucy from the window and meet her at the door so that she doesn’t ring the bell, not that Dad would hear. She’s wearing an ass- skimming dress with a zip all the way down the back. Awesome.

‘Is your father in?’ she says.

‘He’s working late. You’ll meet him next time. Anyway, you’re here to see me.’

I pull her into the house and onto the sofa. Her zip slides down like a dream. She undoes her bra herself! Her tongue’s so far down my throat that I can hardly breathe.

SHIT!

Footsteps upstairs. Plodding like a brachiosaurus. ‘You okay?’ asks Lucy.

‘Yeah.’

The bedroom door rattles.

‘What’s that noise?’ she says.

‘It’s just the wind. Come here.’

She lies back down. She unbuckles my belt. She . . .

KERRRRANG!

A crash shakes the room. Lucy and I leap apart. Plates fall from the dresser and smash on the tiles.

‘It’s a fucking earthquake,’ gasps Lucy.

Flakes of paint drift from the ceiling onto her hair. It looks like she’s got dandruff.

‘What the hell was that?’ she says.

‘I dunno. I’ll check. Don’t follow me. They could be armed.’

‘But . . . ’

‘Actually, you’d better go.’

‘What?’

‘Quickly. Get out!’

I push her towards the door. She struggles to zip up her dress, grabs her shoes and runs out of the house.

I tear upstairs, heart beating fast, and fumble with the key. Dad’s legs, like giant bloated sausages, protrude from the bathroom door. I cross the bedroom and step over him to get into the en suite. He’s on his back and his  

dressing  

gown  

has  

fallen  

open.  

His  

belly  

has  

flopped  

to  

one  

side,  

flab  

 splayed  

across  

the  

lino.  

His  

shrivelled  

penis  

looks  

pitiful;;  

no  

son  

wants  

to  

 see where he came from looking like that. The medicine cabinet has fallen off the wall: paracetamol bottles on the ground.

‘Dad! Are you okay?’

‘I tripped and fell against the cabinet. I can’t get myself off the bloody floor.’

I rearrange his dressing gown, tie the belt, help him sit up.

‘I’m sorry, Ben. I’m so fat that I can’t even . . . ’

‘It’s  

alright,  

Dad.’  

I  

take  

his  

hand.  

It’s  

the  

first  

time  

I’ve  

held  

his  

hand  

since  

 I  

 was  

 a  

 kid.  

 It’s  

 plump  

 and  

 soft  

 but  

 his  

 grip’s  

 tight;;  

 his  

 grip’s  

 just  

 like  

 it  

 used to be.

This story is the winner of our Short Story Competition, which was judged by Edna O’Brien, Cathy Galvin and Alison MacLeod.

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